In Elder Days

In the elder days
They abandoned better ways
And entered hell’s maze

No one entered in
To ask forgiveness for sin
To again begin

All good forsaking
Memories were left standing
And children weeping

In our own blind way
Do we do better today?
And what do we say?


Note: This poem is comprised of four haikus running along one theme . . . Hope you enjoy. Blessings to one and all!

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11 thoughts on “In Elder Days

    1. Thank you, Kamal… This time I actually attempted writing a poem about the picture instead of simply finding a picture to go along with my poem. In other words, the picture came first, then the poem.

    1. Yes, actually I did…. This time I actually attempted writing a poem about the picture instead of simply finding a picture to go along with my poem. In other words, the picture came first, then the poem. I think it worked.

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